tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5642900783184966762.post6807966175035936707..comments2012-11-13T08:50:02.740-08:00Comments on What's Cookin' Good Lookin': The Perfect MealUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5642900783184966762.post-35563358205663473142012-11-13T08:50:02.740-08:002012-11-13T08:50:02.740-08:00My favorite part is when you talk about not having...My favorite part is when you talk about not having enough arms. <br />I can also identify with not feeling up to a mother's standards. My mom is the ideal party host; she tried to train me to do the same, but I don't think I ever got a handle on it the same way she did. At least not yet. <br />Is there any way you can show your mother more instead of tell? Flashbacks are often amusing.Vorousmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07810453968791491961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5642900783184966762.post-76433050099008539862012-11-12T22:25:28.772-08:002012-11-12T22:25:28.772-08:00I have an urgent question: which Modest Mouse CD w...I have an urgent question: which Modest Mouse CD were you listening to? Also, love the Mountain Goats. I had a picture taken with me and John Darnielle. I'm nerding out right now.<br /><br />But I find the music choices significant. When Modest Mouse played, things didn't go well because they didn't go as planned, and MM produces some negative or pessimistic music despite the fact I will always love them. Especially in contrast to the Darnielle's bright, acoustic guitar. But whoa whoa the pirate's life for me.<br /><br />Anyway, I really enjoyed this line "What I couldn’t forget is that cake tastes like cake no matter what shape it’s in."Colin Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01731981716739473818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5642900783184966762.post-69258539963598393652012-11-12T20:39:00.931-08:002012-11-12T20:39:00.931-08:00Like Katherine and Kelsey, I think you include con...Like Katherine and Kelsey, I think you include conversation really well in this piece. I feel like a guest at your dinner party! I also love the menu! The cake sounds like such a fun adventure! Can't wait to discuss this in class!kelseydonkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08890139082702666433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5642900783184966762.post-24099820014185801652012-11-12T16:38:08.487-08:002012-11-12T16:38:08.487-08:00I love how you incorporate the conversation and mu...I love how you incorporate the conversation and music your story. It sounded like a wonderful time and I like that you choose something that reminded you of home. Great job!Kelsey Baakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13651288231939387993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5642900783184966762.post-85354093038394161782012-11-12T16:24:01.632-08:002012-11-12T16:24:01.632-08:00I think it's so funny how music and cooking/fo...I think it's so funny how music and cooking/food have been so much a topic in our class. I know I love to cook to music, it makes me excited complete the sometimes chore. This is really well written, nice metaphors! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01465596743436065996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5642900783184966762.post-15134947473435803702012-11-11T13:47:24.626-08:002012-11-11T13:47:24.626-08:00I love your description of the funfetti cake incid...I love your description of the funfetti cake incident as well as how you describe your feelings throughout. Sounds like a great meal to me!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00715528260727247039noreply@blogger.com